I am just going to say it - I adore this girl. Cadence can light up the stormiest of days. Really. Just look at her.
I have been worrying over this storyline for ages. It has been almost 5 months since I did anything with Wyatt's story. The piece changed quite a bit from its first incarnation. I had a whole deal going on with Wyatt coming to terms finally with his mother's death but it was just too fluffy. I am tired of the idea of Wyatt clinging so desperately to the past and wanted to move him along. Instead he ended up knee deep in the same old stuff. No more poor Wyatt! He needs to move forward! Right?
So. The piece is extremely short. It doesn't really go anywhere. It doesn't even fit with the main story line but whatever. I need to keep him on track. Although at this point where the track goes is no longer clear. I'm stuck in Lodi again. (CCR reference for those keeping track)
The shots are unimaginative. It began to snow. Why? Because in my world, Millwood and wherever it is that Melinda lives are in the same NB and since I just completed Mel's piece, well you get the picture. I worked around it as best as I could. Oh yeah...and it rained. It wasn't supposed to rain.
I have not gotten around to adding music to all of Wyatt's chapters so if you would like to listen to the piece that accompanies this chapter, scroll down to #8 in the playlist. Velver Revolver. Totally worth a listen.
Linkage -> Rising Above - Chapter 10 ~ Fall to Pieces
Oh goodie, I've been waiting for the next chapter. I love Wyatt and Cadence :)
ReplyDeleteI hope you are doing well.
that shot of Cade is absolutely beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI loved that piece you did at Julia's house. Maybe we ought to have a place to show old pieces of writing as well as shots that didn't make it - that one is a gem.
and looky at the links...wow...
Muzegoddess: Thanks! I love them as well. I am glad they hit it off so well.
ReplyDeleteSB: I liked that shot too! Yeah, Julia's house...I figured throwing the shot of it in at the beginning would pretty much cover what I wrote.
*shakes head* I was adding the "Read More" deal to the rest of the posts. And now I have linkage but only to 6 chapters? WTF? Oh well, it will probably be gone next time I look.
IT was great Gayl!!
ReplyDeleteHopefully Cadence is what Wyatt needs to stop living in the past... :D
I think this chapter does change everything in a way. :D lol hopefully Wyatt will see it too..
that is a lovely shot... Cadence and Wyatt look lovely together!
Thank you S@ndy! I really adore Cadence. I think she and Wyatt can be happy.
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